Submission review

I recently entered the AFAR Travel Photography Awards and was given a free submission review by a LensCulture photographic expert.

The images are shown above, and this is the review:

Hello Nick!

Thanks for your submission to AFAR “Travel Photography Awards 2018”. It was a pleasure viewing your work.

It’s an amazing collection of wildlife pictures that show that you have the necessary level to create images perfectly executed and composed.

Technically there is not much to suggest as your images demonstrate great ability and confidence. You consider yourself as a professional and this is obvious from the high quality of your work.

You have a very good sense of composition and use of natural lighting and the colour palette is intimate to the eye.

Equipment for this kind of photography is crucial (because you need excellent quality) and here is obvious that you have the best equipment for a work like this one.

Wildlife photography is exciting but also exhausting at the same time and requires a lot of patience, time and hard work to be able to create an interesting and significant work in this genre.

But I believe you'll achieve to succeed in the field because it’s obvious that you're passionate and dedicated to what you do.

The construction of a good series depends on the good editing. Εditing doesn't mean only the digital treatment in Photoshop.

Editing is also the selection of the proper pictures in order to start building the sequencing. Here you have done an excellent work.

You include pictures of many animals in different situations. However, I’ve noticed that pictures #2 and #5 are pretty much identical.

Try not to use similar images. This is too important because similar images create the sense of repetition. Repetition might make or break the whole series, so be careful with that.

The second most important element of the contemporary photography is the statement.

I would like to see a different and a better-developed statement about your inspiration and intention for those pictures.

It’s important for a photographer to be able to express those ideas because it helps you to bring more depth to the viewers understanding of the photos.

Now your statement is too abstract and you speak only for you and not for your pictures. I hope you understand what I mean. However, it is very good, and important that you accompany each picture with a few words.

Keep up the good work Nick. Obviously, you are a good and talented photographer. My engagement with your work was a delightful experience and I hope to see more of your pictures soon.

Best Regards

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Nick Dale
I read English at Oxford before beginning a career as a strategy consultant in London. After a spell as Project Manager, I left to set up various businesses, including raising $5m in funding as Development Director for www.military.com in San Francisco, building a £1m property portfolio in Notting Hill and the Alps and financing the first two albums by Eden James, an Australian singer-songwriter who has now won record deals with Sony and EMI and reached number one in Greece with his first single Cherub Feathers. In 1998, I had lunch with a friend of mine who had an apartment in the Alps and ended up renting the place for the whole season. That was probably the only real decision I’ve ever made in my life! After ‘retiring’ at the age of 29, I spent seven years skiing and playing golf in France, Belgium, America and Australia before returning to London to settle down and start a family. That hasn’t happened yet, but I’ve now decided to focus on ‘quality of life’. That means trying to maximise my enjoyment rather than my salary. As I love teaching, I spend a few hours a week as a private tutor in south-west London and on assignment in places as far afield as Hong Kong and Bodrum. In my spare time, I enjoy playing tennis, writing, acting, photography, dancing, skiing and coaching golf. I still have all the same problems as everyone else, but at least I never get up in the morning wishing I didn’t have to go to work!
http://www.nickdalephotography.com
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